Expressing emotions through chengyu
Use chengyu (成语) as precise emotional lenses. Keep the idiom in Chinese with pinyin; keep all guidance and examples in English. Choose **one idiom per emotion beat**, match intensity, and anchor with one sensory detail.
- Chengyu Idioms
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Article 4 of 6 in Chengyu-for-Creative-Writing/
Emotion Palettes (pick by feeling, then intensity)
- Calm / Composure
- Light: 心平气和 (xīn píng qì hé) — even-tempered.
- Steady: 泰然自若 (tài rán zì ruò) — unflustered.
- Deep: 不动声色 (bù dòng shēng sè) — poker-faced calm.
- Joy / Delight
- Spark: 喜出望外 (xǐ chū wàng wài) — surprised with joy.
- Warm: 眉开眼笑 (méi kāi yǎn xiào) — beaming.
- Peak: 欢天喜地 (huān tiān xǐ dì) — overjoyed (festive).
- Sadness / Melancholy
- Quiet: 郁郁寡欢 (yù yù guǎ huān) — low spirits.
- Heavy: 黯然神伤 (àn rán shén shāng) — downcast, pained.
- Stormy: 愁云惨雾 (chóu yún cǎn wù) — gloom thick as fog.
- Fear / Anxiety
- Nerves: 忐忑不安 (tǎn tè bù ān) — uneasy.
- Alarm: 惶惶不安 (huáng huáng bù ān) — jittery.
- Panic: 惊慌失措 (jīng huāng shī cuò) — at a loss in fright.
- Anger / Irritation
- Edge: 气急败坏 (qì jí bài huài) — beside oneself.
- Controlled: 怒火中烧 (nù huǒ zhōng shāo) — anger burning.
- Outburst: 勃然大怒 (bó rán dà nù) — erupt in rage.
- Love / Affection
- Tender: 情深意重 (qíng shēn yì zhòng) — deep feeling.
- Devoted: 海誓山盟 (hǎi shì shān méng) — vows as deep as sea/mountain.
- Fond nostalgia: 青梅竹马 (qīng méi zhú mǎ) — childhood sweethearts.
- Pride / Confidence
- Poised: 胸有成竹 (xiōng yǒu chéng zhú) — fully prepared.
- Upright: 正气凛然 (zhèng qì lǐn rán) — righteous presence.
- Swelled (risky): 目中无人 (mù zhōng wú rén) — arrogant; use sparingly.
- Shame / Regret
- Ashamed: 汗颜无地 (hàn yán wú dì) — mortified.
- Remorse: 痛心疾首 (tòng xīn jí shǒu) — heart-struck with regret.
- Surprise / Awe
- Startled: 大吃一惊 (dà chī yī jīng) — taken aback.
- Awe: 叹为观止 (tàn wéi guān zhǐ) — gasp as if nothing beyond it.
Placement Patterns (sound natural in prose)
- Predicate (adjectival punch): “她心平气和,继续把书页抚平。”
- Adverbial (manner): “他忐忑不安地敲门。”
- Modifier (before a noun): “一段情深意重的来信。”
- Sentence-initial frame: “勃然大怒,他把杯子摁回桌面。”
Intensity Ladders (avoid overkill)
- Calm → composed → stoic: 心平气和 → 泰然自若 → 不动声色.
- Uneasy → alarmed → panicked: 忐忑不安 → 惶惶不安 → 惊慌失措.
- Pleased → delighted → exuberant: 眉开眼笑 → 喜出望外 → 欢天喜地. Pick the lowest rung that carries your scene; let details raise it if needed.
Show, Then Name (idiom + sensory anchor)
- 忐忑不安: fingertips drum the ticket edge; “他忐忑不安地看向检票口。”
- 黯然神伤: streetlights smear on wet asphalt; “她在雨棚下黯然神伤。”
- 勃然大怒: steam hisses from the kettle; “他勃然大怒,却只把火旋钮关小。”
Before → After (emotion upgrade)
- Flat: She felt nervous before the call.
Lifted: 电话接通前,她忐忑不安 (tǎn tè bù ān),拇指在桌角来回摩挲。 - Flat: He was very proud of the plan.
Lifted: 复盘后他胸有成竹 (xiōng yǒu chéng zhú),只在纸边圈出三步。
Contrast & Turn (emotional beats that move the scene)
- Calm → panic: 泰然自若 → 意外失电 → 惊慌失措。
- Rage → restraint: 怒火中烧 → 看见孩子睡脸 → 不动声色。
- Gloom → surprise joy: 郁郁寡欢 → 来信到达 → 喜出望外。 Use the idioms to label the hinge; show a concrete trigger.
Tone & Register Checks (stay precise)
- For intimate scenes, favor image-forward idioms: 眉开眼笑、黯然神伤.
- For public or formal tone, pick poised items: 心平气和、泰然自若.
- Avoid hyperbolic ones (欢天喜地、勃然大怒) unless the scene truly warrants peak emotion.
Pitfalls (and quick fixes)
- Stacking: one emotion = one idiom. Add details instead of piling synonyms.
- Mis-polarity: don’t use a cautionary item (e.g., 目中无人) when you mean positive pride.
- Slot errors: modifiers need 的; adverbials can take 地 (often optional with four-beat idioms).
- Cliché drift: if it reads generic, swap in a concrete action right after the idiom.
Mini Prompts (write 1–2 sentences each)
- Pre-interview calm with a small ritual — use 心平气和 + a hand detail.
- Sudden outage at a concert — move 忐忑不安 → 惊慌失措 with one sound cue.
- Reunion at a station — end on 喜出望外 with one visual detail.
- A dignified refusal — use 不动声色 with one gesture.
Quick Checklist (revision in 30 seconds)
- Right emotion palette and intensity?
- Correct placement (predicate/adverbial/modifier/initial)?
- One sensory anchor after the idiom?
- Register fits narrator and scene?
- No polarity mistakes or stacked idioms?
Takeaway: Choose a chengyu that matches the exact emotional temperature, place it cleanly, and immediately ground it with a small, vivid action. Your characters’ feelings will read sharper and more human.